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Still, best Science Fair ever.
I think the comma after ”sleek“ is wrong and there is a ”the“ too many in the last speech bubble. Also, is there a reason the scientist is called ”Tom“?
I fixed the extra “the”, I disagree about the comma in panel one, and the name is just a coincidence. Thanks for the heads-up.
Well, I googled for the phrase ”sleek retro design“ and most others also drop the comma. Plus, I think the adjective ”sleek“ modifies the compound noun ”retro design,“ so I don’t see why they should be seperated by a comma. Would you also write ”bright, full moon“?
I saw “sleek” and “retro” as two separate aspects of the design, and therefore listed them separately.
Wow. Doc Brown really *was* based on every 1930-1960 mad scientist, wasn’t he?
I really enjoy my regular STREWTH! fix. Very funny!
Thanks, Randall! I dig your blog and your art.
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